STORY TIME!!!

previously i ended where luis is going for making his birthday with his friends and family and on his way he again encounters the strange building and he sees the light on in it and go to the building…. and also asked some suggestions for which way the story should turn but got none so i maked my own turn of it.

THE ADVENTURES OF LUIS AND THE RING

PART 2: As luis goes towards the building and finds out something strange about he decides to go inside and check it out by himself. Here christiana and his mother and father are waiting for luis and also his friends are waiting for the birthday boy but he instead goes inside the building to find something that he didn’t expected to see there as it was a whole big building there and beautiful too. He goes through the corridors of it to find some people inside it and he hears them talking and also sees that they are some dangerous people and in that time they see him and attack him with their magic and luis ducks and gets hold of a ring and book and he also attacks them suddenly and he tans out from there and run for his home and there he sees his parents and friends all waiting for him and his friends asks him where he jad been and he tells them a lie he got late from the football practice and changes and celebrates his birthday in style with family and friends and goes out for dinner and feels a different sensation in his body and thinks that ot maybe beacause of the ring and ignores it to avoid showing it too his friends and family and and later that night he is on his bed took out the book that he got from the building and sees that it is a book of magic containing spells and explanation of the power and history of the ring that he wore and suddenly the image of thre master of the ring comes alive and tells him about the ring and the people he saw there that they wanted to destroy his place and the town and also the master tells him where to go to find the man who can train him in the ring and he will meet his tem there and so luis is all shocked to listen and hear ot and liatens it and sleeps in the bed and wakes in the morning fro high school day and he feels different in his body and then he remember the ring and hides it and goes with christiana and the day goes as usual and then when he getsvhome he finds a map to the man who will train him and he decides to go in the evening if he has been chosen for this…

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